tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post1421901208223740964..comments2024-03-28T16:02:34.249-04:00Comments on Bug's Eye View: NewThe Bughttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-87261977031851399962012-04-13T04:57:38.883-04:002012-04-13T04:57:38.883-04:00I LOVE that first line!
I never wake up with anyth...I LOVE that first line!<br />I never wake up with anything that lovely on my mind. <br />I do not think I have a poetic soul, and it's so obvious you DO!<br />The entire poem is very good. <br />But that first line will stick with me for a long time.Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13256552315634307734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-51433780508423859742012-04-12T18:30:55.224-04:002012-04-12T18:30:55.224-04:00And it works!
=)And it works!<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-3471402971152121852012-04-11T15:04:56.725-04:002012-04-11T15:04:56.725-04:00top quality pometop quality pomeDon't Feed The Pixieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05380146661526476947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-61900511652659020032012-04-11T14:59:58.964-04:002012-04-11T14:59:58.964-04:00And your compost provides such a fertile soil for ...And your compost provides such a fertile soil for your words. :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-21223355239860683132012-04-11T00:51:07.812-04:002012-04-11T00:51:07.812-04:00I so enjoyed this piece - it speaks to many parts ...I so enjoyed this piece - it speaks to many parts of my mind. (and body) :)Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-82233596220472239852012-04-10T17:00:25.080-04:002012-04-10T17:00:25.080-04:00oh I loved that one :) It's wonderful. I love ...oh I loved that one :) It's wonderful. I love the varying line lengths. And your full stops. Gorgeous.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05075292153806720848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-54551051466074612272012-04-10T13:56:37.408-04:002012-04-10T13:56:37.408-04:00I can relate to this Bug.....awesome writing here!...I can relate to this Bug.....awesome writing here!!! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-84301351345202744292012-04-10T13:19:16.352-04:002012-04-10T13:19:16.352-04:00Nice job Bug.Nice job Bug.STILLMAGNOLIAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07453175923858351452noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-30572343534403363972012-04-10T12:24:40.361-04:002012-04-10T12:24:40.361-04:00Brilliant Bug...I can certainly relate to being a ...Brilliant Bug...I can certainly relate to being a compost...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-83697029945725385302012-04-10T11:49:28.252-04:002012-04-10T11:49:28.252-04:00Jump start for my brain this morning, trying to co...Jump start for my brain this morning, trying to come up with a new metaphor!!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-38568005085773654762012-04-10T11:41:35.825-04:002012-04-10T11:41:35.825-04:00See how much admiration that first stanza is getti...See how much admiration that first stanza is getting? Hmmmm....<br /><br />(I agree, btw. Put it in your Work In Progress portfolio.)<br /><br />UNRELATED: We had a few soggy snowflakes in NEO this AM. Did you?Nancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17627214346956206283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-27151424529322000502012-04-10T10:10:11.523-04:002012-04-10T10:10:11.523-04:00I love your take on turning over a new leaf! Ring...I love your take on turning over a new leaf! Rings true for many of us.NCmountainwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00615765649828716560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-72764602653216301732012-04-10T07:14:01.813-04:002012-04-10T07:14:01.813-04:00Dana - I like it, like it.
Can you send me a bag ...Dana - I like it, like it.<br /><br />Can you send me a bag of that compost please? Or whatever you can spare.<br /><br />Love, Phil.PhilipHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06811831703263176415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-18407575221243287512012-04-10T06:21:08.297-04:002012-04-10T06:21:08.297-04:00Nice one. And oh, find me that metaphor!Nice one. And oh, find me that metaphor!Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-55487889736084579462012-04-10T06:10:42.804-04:002012-04-10T06:10:42.804-04:00Try to set fire to it all, Bug, and stand there ca...Try to set fire to it all, Bug, and stand there cackling madly, but perhaps it will be too green ?Silent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-49894074003930534822012-04-10T00:24:15.340-04:002012-04-10T00:24:15.340-04:00Great poem...not sure how you poetic types do it!!...Great poem...not sure how you poetic types do it!!Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10818307096793017985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-14109462481663099402012-04-10T00:00:11.835-04:002012-04-10T00:00:11.835-04:00You can turn a phrase quite well, too.You can turn a phrase quite well, too.Rudeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17889298704039071473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-81340286289034793362012-04-09T21:59:37.928-04:002012-04-09T21:59:37.928-04:00I thibnk it worked out well and I love the first s...I thibnk it worked out well and I love the first stanza!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-59064037876434847022012-04-09T20:03:00.882-04:002012-04-09T20:03:00.882-04:00"I’ve turned over a
new leaf so often
that my..."I’ve turned over a<br />new leaf so often<br />that my soul should be<br />a fine compost by now."<br /><br />Love it. I've certainly done my share of leaf-turning-over. We just keep trying.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-50593262988448803152012-04-09T19:51:47.284-04:002012-04-09T19:51:47.284-04:00I enjoyed reading your poem, Bug. It feels much li...I enjoyed reading your poem, Bug. It feels much like the way I felt when I wrote my poem this week, but you expressed your thinking way more succinctly then I was able to do. I don't like thinking about large bodies of water with no shore visible in the distance. I am okay with fields. Thanks for sharing. =DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-9394644355403330112012-04-09T19:47:22.944-04:002012-04-09T19:47:22.944-04:00i love the first stanza...and that a withered vine...i love the first stanza...and that a withered vine makes you feel parched yet a grassy field a bonfire...interesting conundrum that...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-48520983595496873182012-04-09T18:52:11.887-04:002012-04-09T18:52:11.887-04:00I don't know how my blogger friends have time ...I don't know how my blogger friends have time to work and do all these prompts and challenges. You guys must be a lot more organized than I am.stephen Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17659054447637207734noreply@blogger.com