tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post4270555903360841390..comments2024-03-28T16:02:34.249-04:00Comments on Bug's Eye View: Magpie Tales - Week FiveThe Bughttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-45048626870206219422010-03-17T13:02:55.858-04:002010-03-17T13:02:55.858-04:00A throughly poignant and provocative poem. I can a...A throughly poignant and provocative poem. I can almost smell the candle burning wetly. And the red crescents? Are these tattoos? Or symbols of some kind? Haunting. Well done!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-57013748881130157292010-03-16T21:13:04.090-04:002010-03-16T21:13:04.090-04:00so effective ...
four crescents - doewide dark &...so effective ... <br /><br />four crescents - doewide dark & deep - great empty cavern of my womb<br /><br />very poignant and haunting...<br /><br />BellaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-11885920575941077192010-03-16T18:33:28.283-04:002010-03-16T18:33:28.283-04:00Writing from the heart is always more powerful.
Di...Writing from the heart is always more powerful.<br />Didn't get the four red crescents - if you were submitting that, I'd wonder about making it a bit clearer somehow as a few of us didn't get it.<br />Very very goodPeter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-35243569305991754152010-03-16T16:59:55.615-04:002010-03-16T16:59:55.615-04:00This is real and honest -- I enjoyed this, thank y...This is real and honest -- I enjoyed this, thank you for sharing…<br />…rob<br /><a href="http://www.image-verse.com/graspless" rel="nofollow">Image & Verse</a>robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-58806091972217953662010-03-16T16:28:39.667-04:002010-03-16T16:28:39.667-04:00Great writing! Loved the red crescents and striki...Great writing! Loved the red crescents and striking match image. Keep it up, you're good at this.Argenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10532506690426639326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-15819225075964702542010-03-16T13:55:20.474-04:002010-03-16T13:55:20.474-04:00I too can imagine the empty cavern...sad poem full...I too can imagine the empty cavern...sad poem full of genuine feeling.steviewrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14233066158555762167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-85963632968774220502010-03-16T10:41:56.591-04:002010-03-16T10:41:56.591-04:00I can see why this won an award. I hope that you w...I can see why this won an award. I hope that you will give Magpie a try again.torihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06366799846606991571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-86323277867673077132010-03-16T09:49:37.239-04:002010-03-16T09:49:37.239-04:00Strong sad images. Beautiful.Strong sad images. Beautiful.Vicki Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08114677510459055768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-4680036933520481072010-03-16T07:01:43.353-04:002010-03-16T07:01:43.353-04:00Mystical and hauntingly sad. Nicely written.Mystical and hauntingly sad. Nicely written.Jan of Thousand Acreshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06465791173754714407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-75171519636029652312010-03-16T06:41:00.326-04:002010-03-16T06:41:00.326-04:00Sweet poem!
It opens with eyes "deep with lov...Sweet poem!<br />It opens with eyes "deep with love", and ends with eyes of "shining love". And in the middle of it and of the dark night - the match, candle, and the pale moon cooperating and providing for some light to enable staring at that look, at those eyes.DUTAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12979375799258978432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-27806102385646223912010-03-16T05:16:22.971-04:002010-03-16T05:16:22.971-04:00Well done.Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-69973319690367067222010-03-16T05:09:34.473-04:002010-03-16T05:09:34.473-04:00Lovely work Bug. I didn;t get the four cresents bu...Lovely work Bug. I didn;t get the four cresents but I love them now. "doewide doeeyed" Very evocative.<br />I don't have any writing from my school days. A few embarrassing pieces from eary Uni era and lots of letters i wrote my parents when i first left home to live interstate. Strange that my mother kept them for thirty odd years.Steve Capelinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838386764407644146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-87369317730885954292010-03-16T02:18:28.597-04:002010-03-16T02:18:28.597-04:00It is interesting to back and read pieces that wer...It is interesting to back and read pieces that were done long ago. I recently found a binder I used in high school for all of my so called poetry. Some still holds up. Some not. This is truly a lovely, poignant piece.<br /><br />On another note, Evening Light Writer also responded to my e-mail saying she was just ending a phase of her life and would return. Thanks for you correspondence, Dana.Ronda Laveenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03902846545309643023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-29616026144338629152010-03-16T00:17:03.910-04:002010-03-16T00:17:03.910-04:00Dear The Bug,
I got the clenching fist, I did.
Yo...Dear The Bug,<br />I got the clenching fist, I did.<br /><br />You really do have talent, I think you should keep on with the magpie!<br /><br />Ann T.Ann T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11128699035211561119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-11221236779066749892010-03-15T22:35:07.261-04:002010-03-15T22:35:07.261-04:00It's the marks my fingernails make when I clen...It's the marks my fingernails make when I clench my fist :)The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-6782211874819416602010-03-15T22:26:02.476-04:002010-03-15T22:26:02.476-04:00Haunting and sad. I'm intrigued with the myste...Haunting and sad. I'm intrigued with the mysterious four red crescents. <br /><br />So glad you linked to Magpie, Bug!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-17227629056357944722010-03-15T22:24:01.896-04:002010-03-15T22:24:01.896-04:00Wow! this is a great endevour into the Magpie Tale...Wow! this is a great endevour into the Magpie Tales. I admire those of you who participate, as this is not my strong suit. Excellent, and keep up the good works.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-28267022798928031042010-03-15T22:17:38.880-04:002010-03-15T22:17:38.880-04:00I know all about that empty cavern called womb. Wh...I know all about that empty cavern called womb. What I don't know about are red crescents. Am I having a blond moment?altar egohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564052536173244610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-14780663105776549112010-03-15T21:53:13.686-04:002010-03-15T21:53:13.686-04:00and feel the empty cavern of my womb...wow...nicel...and feel the empty cavern of my womb...wow...nicely done.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com