tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post3987462618066366930..comments2024-03-28T16:02:34.249-04:00Comments on Bug's Eye View: Magpie Tales, Week TenThe Bughttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-7040501985691111062010-04-22T01:12:29.835-04:002010-04-22T01:12:29.835-04:00Very lovely!! <3Very lovely!! <3Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-87182622079511522572010-04-20T17:49:55.361-04:002010-04-20T17:49:55.361-04:00This line made me stop and think "One minute ...This line made me stop and think "One minute is long enough<br />to rinse the soap<br />and the day down my back." I like the imagery of rinsing the day with all its cares and troubles down the drain each day.steviewrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14233066158555762167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-1108785956022184442010-04-20T17:23:02.315-04:002010-04-20T17:23:02.315-04:00Hi Bug, some lovely phrases in there, well written...Hi Bug, some lovely phrases in there, well written and controlledPeter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-90743074066894369302010-04-20T12:35:54.923-04:002010-04-20T12:35:54.923-04:00How beautiful this was.
This part especially spo...How beautiful this was. <br /><br />This part especially spoke to me..<br /><br />"till sleep shoulders its way<br />through the crowd"<br /><br />How many nights I've waited for that. <br /><br />Lovely, Bug.<br />BellaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-89076486293534080182010-04-20T11:36:58.125-04:002010-04-20T11:36:58.125-04:00Your poem turned in a very surprising direction th...Your poem turned in a very surprising direction there near the end. Surprised me anyway! As Vicki pointed out, the counting down like the ticking of a time bomb that will go off eventually.Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13824632356834631279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-55899333468685031412010-04-20T07:52:17.967-04:002010-04-20T07:52:17.967-04:00Ooo, I like the counting theme here. I'm a cou...Ooo, I like the counting theme here. I'm a counter. I totally relate to this one. Clever, Bug.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-79567909349889327792010-04-20T06:41:29.454-04:002010-04-20T06:41:29.454-04:00This was great! I really liked "till sleep s...This was great! I really liked "till sleep shoulders its way through the crowd". Gently romantic without being sickly. I'm driving the Poetry Bus next week - I think you should come and join in.Argenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10532506690426639326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-59212055496844914142010-04-20T04:43:53.624-04:002010-04-20T04:43:53.624-04:00I liked the poem. How about if I just read your en...I liked the poem. How about if I just read your entries since you do a great job. :)Greg Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01925817439493420666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-88984479770428439822010-04-20T00:23:26.188-04:002010-04-20T00:23:26.188-04:00I can relate to this one for sure -- I am not good...I can relate to this one for sure -- I am not good with clocks and time -- but go with my own inner cadence. <br /><br />Nice work, Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-9536816780074553592010-04-19T23:28:15.644-04:002010-04-19T23:28:15.644-04:00Dear The Bug,
We do count our time, don't we? ...Dear The Bug,<br />We do count our time, don't we? <br /><br />This provokes a lot of thought. I am with Catalyst on this one, how do we live, not just the schedule but the fullness of time.<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Ann T.Ann T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11128699035211561119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-77012567709674888202010-04-19T19:57:49.598-04:002010-04-19T19:57:49.598-04:00love the inspiration photo- are we all so pre-occu...love the inspiration photo- are we all so pre-occupied with time that we have forgotten how to spend it wisely?Bekahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06626966615920269238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-24037504070331238072010-04-19T19:15:35.279-04:002010-04-19T19:15:35.279-04:00http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/19/it-is...http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/19/it-is-time-to/<br /><br />mine is here,<br />thank you in advance for reading it.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-40649275140956908992010-04-19T19:15:08.810-04:002010-04-19T19:15:08.810-04:00I love yours very much,
what vivid and skillful ta...I love yours very much,<br />what vivid and skillful tale!<br /><br />outstanding post!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-58498740364502720642010-04-19T18:55:33.666-04:002010-04-19T18:55:33.666-04:00exhilerating... yes, I love this piece!!!!
I count...exhilerating... yes, I love this piece!!!!<br />I count everything too. ;)<br />relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-6579748675942921412010-04-19T15:27:06.033-04:002010-04-19T15:27:06.033-04:00Very good..with the ring of truth!Very good..with the ring of truth!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-2177250420240300322010-04-19T14:26:27.875-04:002010-04-19T14:26:27.875-04:00Oh Bug, we must learn somehow not to count the pas...Oh Bug, we must learn somehow not to count the passages of time but to live with them. Well written.Catalysthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03804837416104556928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-20173618634233015892010-04-19T14:12:12.118-04:002010-04-19T14:12:12.118-04:00i love those embraces early in the morning...thoug...i love those embraces early in the morning...though this one sounds bit cold...nicely done magpie!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-45583410991391869742010-04-19T13:29:28.650-04:002010-04-19T13:29:28.650-04:00Counting the hours, counting the days, counting th...Counting the hours, counting the days, counting the ticks of the clock. We live in a time when time is so very important that we live for the sound of the hour.<br />This is a well written, thoughtful piece. Well done.<br />StarStella Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06699491230987143490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-84346306641404080652010-04-19T13:12:20.556-04:002010-04-19T13:12:20.556-04:00A hidden story here, ticking like a time bomb. Int...A hidden story here, ticking like a time bomb. Intriguing!Vicki Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08114677510459055768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-15199619510669110812010-04-19T12:52:26.330-04:002010-04-19T12:52:26.330-04:00Hey Bug, I've been offline for a bit, and retu...Hey Bug, I've been offline for a bit, and returned to find lovely words here :-) What a great gift, and a lovely surprise. <br /><br />This one really captured me, and I say that as a person with an iffy relationship to poetry. My mind tends to wander when I read poetry, I don't know why. I think we've actually discussed that here before. <br /><br />So I was riveted, and for me,Land of shimphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15671954452597068904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-12909605880709171132010-04-19T09:34:54.489-04:002010-04-19T09:34:54.489-04:00I admire this talent you and others have. Well do...I admire this talent you and others have. Well done!Brendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04373560689980768576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-3610690695753421582010-04-19T08:24:22.890-04:002010-04-19T08:24:22.890-04:00Dear "The Bug": How I love your affectat...Dear "The Bug": How I love your affectations of affection especially your "chaste" romance with time. Quite a looker! The countdown was indicative of how we (humans) like to make routine our lives and live by the clock rather than just live. It is said one has to countdown for an embrace I can totally relate to that! Time to take charge and hug time back! Maybe he'll give chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-90629893104943739482010-04-19T04:46:00.470-04:002010-04-19T04:46:00.470-04:00Omgosh this was just as I was when I worked full t...Omgosh this was just as I was when I worked full time, I counted and timed every part of getting up and showering to getting into work... yes I was stressed.. <br />Very clever<br /><br />Christinechristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08720643762397784519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-80449315900331617562010-04-18T21:58:49.462-04:002010-04-18T21:58:49.462-04:00Wow. you have such a talent with words. I am pul...Wow. you have such a talent with words. I am pulled in by your poetry.Heidi Clairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00097846126670031259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-60925772634668931612010-04-18T19:41:52.771-04:002010-04-18T19:41:52.771-04:00A very interesting interpretation of the photo. I...A very interesting interpretation of the photo. I really like your poem.Yemallahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08681206942154859520noreply@blogger.com