tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post4417284993377187408..comments2024-03-28T16:02:34.249-04:00Comments on Bug's Eye View: WearyThe Bughttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-53312301593624310482011-11-22T23:04:48.229-05:002011-11-22T23:04:48.229-05:00felt the pain and suffocation in this, as well as ...felt the pain and suffocation in this, as well as the frustration and disappointments of his life.Cathy Feasterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01302068829418562420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-38199869219892110272011-11-22T08:02:01.711-05:002011-11-22T08:02:01.711-05:00exhausted by
All those undone and undoable things
...exhausted by<br />All those undone and undoable things<br /><br />That most of us can relate too. Is anyone really able to "plan" their life? The use of no punctuation really works here.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-80173903945709259782011-11-20T14:36:11.651-05:002011-11-20T14:36:11.651-05:00handsome poetry.handsome poetry.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-16451564202702864162011-11-20T12:44:05.461-05:002011-11-20T12:44:05.461-05:00Molasses air and endless hallways...what a great d...Molasses air and endless hallways...what a great description...sad that the college degree in that rucksack does little...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-20389002682465892802011-11-19T21:38:46.838-05:002011-11-19T21:38:46.838-05:00I understand weary. I wear it like a uniform.
Mo...I understand weary. I wear it like a uniform.<br /><br />Molasses air? Brings to mind the molasses tragedy in Boston. They say on hot days, the residents can still smell molasses.Rudeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17889298704039071473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-9993362905049669112011-11-19T15:21:45.649-05:002011-11-19T15:21:45.649-05:00"The back of my petulance is broken with bles..."The back of my petulance is broken with blessings"....this is an amazing piece of writing Bug....:-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-45980637038435234662011-11-19T09:34:37.834-05:002011-11-19T09:34:37.834-05:00Thanks guys. Chris - it felt rather relentless as ...Thanks guys. Chris - it felt rather relentless as I was writing it!The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-10884014649682203782011-11-19T04:17:25.342-05:002011-11-19T04:17:25.342-05:00An interesting one. Good work.
xAn interesting one. Good work.<br />xRachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-34732188020014465162011-11-19T02:46:07.579-05:002011-11-19T02:46:07.579-05:00Oh, dear one, this is spectacular. From the mechan...Oh, dear one, this is spectacular. From the mechanical detail of the omitted punctuation (it drives me forward relentlessly), to the poetic details of structure (that use of the repetitive "As if" is compelling), phrasing (that last line!), extended metaphor...those five pairs of black trousers...honey, you got it all goin' on!Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-30403736024286020592011-11-18T23:45:44.496-05:002011-11-18T23:45:44.496-05:00Hi & Greetings ! Chanced upon your blog. Very ...Hi & Greetings ! Chanced upon your blog. Very happy to read your post.Such a meaningful & melancholy poem. Very beautiful.The picture of the weary lady is superb!<br />Have a great weekend.Ramakrishnanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06391020678534194379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-90736234776737412482011-11-18T19:31:17.581-05:002011-11-18T19:31:17.581-05:00I've always loved that photo.I've always loved that photo.Catalysthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03804837416104556928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-23493973105398745052011-11-18T19:09:59.737-05:002011-11-18T19:09:59.737-05:00Yes, that last line pulls it all together wonderfu...Yes, that last line pulls it all together wonderfully!stephen Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17659054447637207734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-1832502334199947072011-11-18T19:06:24.330-05:002011-11-18T19:06:24.330-05:00Oh, bravo Bug! Love 'Molasses air' and the...Oh, bravo Bug! Love 'Molasses air' and the whole movement of the poem to the final line. The very good final line.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.com