tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post456655547077263717..comments2024-03-28T16:02:34.249-04:00Comments on Bug's Eye View: SaltThe Bughttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-50130645563775738492011-12-16T00:43:25.112-05:002011-12-16T00:43:25.112-05:00Very nice - with just the right touch of ambiguity...Very nice - with just the right touch of ambiguity at the end. Well done!shoreacreshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16284698314697628805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-2804004886738175742011-12-14T23:30:54.826-05:002011-12-14T23:30:54.826-05:00Wow! That is sensational, Dana.Wow! That is sensational, Dana.Catalysthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03804837416104556928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-72652474266024446582011-12-14T09:12:04.006-05:002011-12-14T09:12:04.006-05:00The confusion as between sea and beating heart is ...The confusion as between sea and beating heart is exactly right. Great post.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-53630070395018835262011-12-13T23:25:27.609-05:002011-12-13T23:25:27.609-05:00Ha! Needed a dictionary for this one. Beautiful!...Ha! Needed a dictionary for this one. Beautiful!Rudeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17889298704039071473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-50452623851231483242011-12-13T17:43:50.495-05:002011-12-13T17:43:50.495-05:00Ah, I so enjoyed this piece.Ah, I so enjoyed this piece.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-80662770922685549082011-12-13T17:21:43.582-05:002011-12-13T17:21:43.582-05:00I know these dreams...lovely write, Bug...I know these dreams...lovely write, Bug...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-49185693166217158682011-12-13T11:37:01.837-05:002011-12-13T11:37:01.837-05:00susurration...what a brilliant word for that line....susurration...what a brilliant word for that line...love it!Gerry Snapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07269492251928362799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-54577485008057775432011-12-13T07:58:22.506-05:002011-12-13T07:58:22.506-05:00fabulous,,, love the word susurration and yes that...fabulous,,, love the word susurration and yes that's a killer endingNiamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-74460784773887956692011-12-13T07:50:21.552-05:002011-12-13T07:50:21.552-05:00Ah, that dream state that takes us to other places...Ah, that dream state that takes us to other places - places that feel scary and familiar at the same time. Good job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-50165816007730241452011-12-13T07:40:55.265-05:002011-12-13T07:40:55.265-05:00Good writing; thoughts well expressed.Good writing; thoughts well expressed.Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-82159971868712333982011-12-13T03:35:14.127-05:002011-12-13T03:35:14.127-05:00"Susurration" is such a good word. :)"Susurration" is such a good word. :)Steve Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11684120060438252945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-79885840270898499092011-12-12T22:13:28.153-05:002011-12-12T22:13:28.153-05:00the conspiracy of water...nice...scary kinda dream...the conspiracy of water...nice...scary kinda dream there...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-31871525695140749852011-12-12T21:37:26.715-05:002011-12-12T21:37:26.715-05:00I LOVE this! Pretty fond of you, too, dear Bug :-)...I LOVE this! Pretty fond of you, too, dear Bug :-)Carolina Lintheadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16335905555994442416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-79809248178286758722011-12-12T19:19:19.591-05:002011-12-12T19:19:19.591-05:00Yes, I know that dream as well....:-)Yes, I know that dream as well....:-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-41830463506254094932011-12-12T19:05:04.569-05:002011-12-12T19:05:04.569-05:00Like your Magpie, in spite of the fact this is one...Like your Magpie, in spite of the fact this is one of my dreaded dreams.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-52627286100015424932011-12-12T17:37:56.930-05:002011-12-12T17:37:56.930-05:00Dana, you are very good at this.Dana, you are very good at this.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-16650279763692108872011-12-12T17:27:36.532-05:002011-12-12T17:27:36.532-05:00I like the part about a conspiracy of water. Nice ...I like the part about a conspiracy of water. Nice job. You say a great deal about the primalness of the sea, which is where I thing we all came from.stephen Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17659054447637207734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2686754906089902443.post-31258472312597378812011-12-12T16:52:54.042-05:002011-12-12T16:52:54.042-05:00Nice! I like the ending a lot!Nice! I like the ending a lot!izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.com