A Game of Patience, 1937, Meredith Frampton |
What care I took to be the one you…what?
And there’s the catch – the murky path I tread –
I cannot see to walk. I cannot stop.
I drop my bags and travel on instead.
You’ve led me down a path of dotted “i”s.
I cross the “t”s with ever greater care.
I watch your face for what and where and why
Until I’m gone, until there’s nothing there.
I say these words as if I live them still
And maybe they are truer than I know.
I take a step and wrestle with my will.
You walk away; I follow where you go.
What care I take to be the one you…what?
I cannot see to walk. I cannot stop.
This is a Magpie Tale.
Genius.
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Eddie :)
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Very nice interpretation of this hauntingly beautiful painting.
ReplyDeleteI cannot see to walk. I cannot stop. This is hitting very close to home for me right now...
ReplyDeleteI really like this one.
ReplyDeleteVery nice Dana! I am trying to catch up on visiting blogs.
ReplyDeleteYour sonnet! Nice work. The meter is perfect.
ReplyDeleteI've been down that road of dotted i's - and what a length it is, too!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant, you capture the psyche of so many women.
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful.
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