Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Summer’s Gone – One Shot Wednesday




Summer's Gone

She drives in darkness
Down the road
The headlights
Alight with autumn glow
Summer's gone

Crops are dormant
Nothing grows
The corn is only
Good for crows
Summer's gone

The world is smaller
The sky so low
She catches her breath
And lets it go
Summer's gone


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16 comments:

  1. ellen abbottSeptember 29, 2010 at 9:40 AM

    bye bye

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  2. Everyday GoddessSeptember 29, 2010 at 10:38 AM

    The seasons get more and more lovely to me. I miss them when the are over, but I like what's on it's way too.

    Excellent oneshot!

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  3. Brian MillerSeptember 29, 2010 at 10:58 AM

    it will be back...and for now we ca love on autumn who brigs her beauty before the long sleep...smiles. nice one shot

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  4. NCmountainwomanSeptember 29, 2010 at 11:03 AM

    Another wonderful one.

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  5. TALONSeptember 29, 2010 at 11:16 AM

    I'm not sorry to see summer go as it was too humid for me this year (yeah, I'm terribly picky) and now we enter my favorite season so I'm excited!

    I loved the imagery and I loved the flow of your poem - a perfect summer adieu!

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  6. dustusSeptember 29, 2010 at 1:15 PM

    Such a great flow. Read a sense continuation and endurance in your lines.

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  7. BubbaSeptember 29, 2010 at 3:14 PM

    A sweet final salute to summer, Bug!

    I see you did what I do all too often and unintentionally: Take pictures that are not quite level.

    (Thank goodness for Photoshop!)

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  8. Sam LiuSeptember 29, 2010 at 3:22 PM

    I can certainly relate to this poem. The rain, bitter winds and colouring leaves of England all confirm your poem's beautiful refrain. A charming, melancholic write.

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  9. ArgentSeptember 29, 2010 at 6:18 PM

    Shprt, sweet and poignant. Nice!

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  10. moondustwriterSeptember 29, 2010 at 6:35 PM

    I hear the lament and then the resolve to move forward. Great application for life.

    Thanks for sharing with One Shot

    Moon lamenting summer's gone

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2010 at 7:21 PM

    "The corn is only
    Good for crows"

    Love it! At least the corn is useful to the crows.

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  12. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2010 at 8:54 PM

    great poem and to be honest i really like winter cooler weather but where i'm living summer has not left

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  13. AnonymousSeptember 30, 2010 at 10:14 AM

    only good for the crows... a little sad. you captured it perfectly... fall is bittersweet.

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  14. BeachannySeptember 30, 2010 at 1:45 PM

    Endings and Beginnings. Seems to be a theme this week as "summer turns to autumn and the present disappears". Lovely work. Thanks, Gay @beachanny

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  15. JinksyOctober 1, 2010 at 9:47 AM

    And a very gentle exit she has made...

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  16. Shashidhar SharmaOctober 1, 2010 at 1:26 PM

    At the end the whole verse converges and says good bye... Lovely.


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