TFE is
driving the bus! He gave us some really intriguing pictures, with the
stipulation that our poem had to be 14 lines long, and I thought I was writing
a poem for the second picture. But when I came up for air my effort had nothing
whatsoever to do with a couple of boys, a donkey and a dog. So I decided that
it matched, vaguely, the prompt regarding the Van Morrison song. Here are our
instructions:
“Plan B, Van Morrison has a song,
'You Don't Pull No Punches But You Don't Push The River' [go here
to hear the song – it’s worth your while in my opinion]. In it he mentions
'The Veedon Fleece' I don't know what the feck that might be so write about
whatever the Veedon Fleece may be to you and then whittle it down to FOURTEEN
lines”
Like
TFE I mostly prefer free verse for my own poetry, but I couldn’t resist the
pull of the sonnet given the 14 line restriction. So, here you go, my take on
the Veedon Fleece (which apparently was someone’s name, but I’m ignoring this
& believing that it’s about finding something you’re searching for). After
you read mine then go check out the other offerings here.
The Veedon Fleece
I
want to help you drive the day away
To
sink into your lonely shepherd’s mind
And
find that corner tucked behind the gray
Where
what I am, and what you are, unwind
The
sheep are safe, locked in behind the gate
And
I am here to draw you to the moon
Its
waning light is bright enough to skate
Through
fields and fens to find our midnight boon
Just
wait my love until I loose your soul
It
waits right there to be set free, unchained
It
wings away just like a thought made whole
Unfettered
by the care of this day’s pain
I
watch the moon until it fills the sky
We
watch the moon together, you and I