Lee Friedlander, from America by Car
Between
Do you remember when
we would swing as
high
as high as gangly legs
could propel?
Then we’d jump jump
jump
landing in soft grass
and the comfort
of a summer day.
I lost my gumball
machine ring
in that grass.
We decided that the
devil
had reached up his
hand
and
snatched
it.
That was when I
started
the march toward
that far horizon.
I’m not there yet
here between the
lost ring
and the end of things,
glad and grateful
that the answer to
the question
(are we there yet?)
is no,
not yet.
This is a Magpie Tale. And it’s letter B for my ABCs of Gratitude
series.
Lovely poem. I keep telling our grown son not to be frustrated with where he is in life; just figure out the path you need to be on. The journey is the thing....
ReplyDeleteNot yet, my love...
ReplyDelete'here between the
ReplyDeletelost ring
and the end of things,'
Beautiful. And the rest too.
nice one... love it!
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
B could also stand for bewitching, for that is how you weave your words. By the way, perhaps Gollum got the ring.
ReplyDeleteEternal question - are we nearly there yet...
ReplyDelete"landing in soft grass and the comfort of a summer day"...wonderful image of childhood. Great poem.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely poem
ReplyDeletesmiles. nah i think you have a little time left...nice textures to this...gotta watch that devil reaching up...
ReplyDeleteI used to dream a lot in the car- nice where you went with youth-
ReplyDeleteand now thank heaven, we are still on the trail...Thanks.
Sometimes I think it's closer than it appears...:) Wonderful piece!
ReplyDeleteAre we there yet.. Someone did have to come up with that! Can't believe it wasn't me ... I have six kids... :)
ReplyDeleteI adored swinging...but I wasn't a jumper...
ReplyDeleteI am not there yet either..there are more dreams, more hopes, more places...I enjoyed your take on the photo...great job!!
ReplyDeletea really lovely poem
ReplyDeletethis was a lovely poem, full of fun
ReplyDeleteand wisdom
I still ask that question
This is sweetly subtly powerful - I love the moment you capture that seems almost frozen between. Well done!
ReplyDeletei appreciate the sensation of small losses and how they accumulate and gather a presence much greater than themselves and yet . . . steven
ReplyDeleteThe prompt took you in an interesting direction...
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