Margaret at Poetry Jam
has given us the task of writing about something that bothered us about
ourselves when we were younger that ended up helping us succeed. Or the other
way around – something we thought was good that has actually hindered us. This
is tough for me because I tend to think of my flaws as being ginormous & in
desperate need of changing. Alternatively, I can’t imagine any positive thing
about myself that isn’t for the best of humankind. Yes, there I am in a
nutshell: insecure egomaniac. It’s hard being me. Heh. And I’m continuing to
type as I try to come up with something to
write about. Hmm. Well, there’s this picture here, which is the Magpie prompt.
Perhaps that will inspire me?
Dreaming with Mrs. Maxwell
When I was a child
I often lived in
another world –
one where
nuclear elephants
grew wings and
were forces of good.
They solved many
crimes and the winged
elephants carried
me safely away
in my hazmat suit.
But then Mrs. Maxwell
rapped my small hand
with her wooden ruler
and I arrived firmly
back in first grade
reading about Dick
and Jane and that dog
that wouldn’t listen.
Mrs. Maxwell tried
but it never really took.
That rapped hand
has since written
many a dream.
Note: Mrs. Maxwell had discussed
what to do with my mother before she used the ruler (this was in 1970 or so).
When she talked to my mother about it afterward they both cried. I loved Mrs.
Maxwell!
2nd Note: I probably
didn’t actually dream about nuclear elephants when I was a first grader – that was
more of a 7th grade daydream.
I hope Mrs. Maxwell appreciated your lovely creative mind...
ReplyDeletemaybe she was tapping into your creativity. I, too, hope she appreciated your talent :)
ReplyDelete...I guess there is a Mrs. Maxwell somewhere in all our lives....love what you did with the prompt Bug!
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I'm really glad you kept dreaming your dreams!
ReplyDeleteI like your hazmat suit, plus the rendering of Dick and Jane having a dog that wouldn't listen.
ReplyDeleteMaybe the age got mixed but it works!
ReplyDeleteMy mother never said a word to my teachers- it was in 7th or 8th grade when the Nuns wrapped our knuckles BUT GOOD! thanks.
It was 8th grade, and the shop teacher who taught geometry, too, was the one who would "ding" us on the head with his big college ring. Hurt like the dickens. Of course, I was too good to get dinged. ;)
ReplyDeleteI liked the poem. One look at that elephant and I went all empty-brained. I don't know what I would have done with it!
cracked me up...I love it
ReplyDeleteMrs.Maxwell...must have done something right
I'm thinking you taught M Maxwell a thing or two! Terrific poem!
ReplyDeleteI think Mrs Maxwell was jealous of the place you could go to
ReplyDeleteWasn't it strange growing up in the '70s and worrying/dreaming about nuclear things? The threat of nuclear war loomed so large for me as a child, and now no one even seems to think about it -- probably a folly on our part, but at least the level of worry has diminished!
ReplyDeleteI like that Mrs. Maxwell apparently had some level of sympathy for you.
Its hard for teachers to teach imagination when they have a curriculum to go through. The whole education system seems designed to crush the free spirit.
ReplyDeleteApart from that, I'm following your advice and seeing if I can post a comment!
You surely turned the tables on Mrs. Maxwell.
ReplyDeletefun take.
ReplyDeletechildhood experiences could be divine.
Bug, this is one of your best ever! Great job combining Jam with Magpies.
ReplyDeletenice...if i had only written mine in poetry but we are on similar veins...that imagination has served you well...
ReplyDeleteYes, what to do with children who would rather use their imaginations than regurgitate rote, boring pablum? They were still hitting kids in SC in the 1990s-one of the reasons I left when I was planning to have a child!
ReplyDeleteLoved this, most especially that transition from the first verse to the second. I am a great admirer of daydreamers, as it's not something I'm able to do myself.
ReplyDeleteVery cool...and I was the same way ummm...very er...vocal?
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone! Mrs. Maxwell was probably my favorite teacher (until 8th grade when I had a teacher who really made me love language). And she loved me too. I was a really good reader & she let me sit on her little rolling stool at story time & listen to the other kids read aloud, while I (gently, I hope) corrected them. It was a great way to start my educational journey!
ReplyDeleteInteresting how children are always thinking about flying. I can't remember the last time I had a flying dream. They say you grow out of them as you get older, but I sure hope this isn't true.
ReplyDeleteSweet cold revenge! I loved it!
ReplyDeleteBTW: If you hadn't spent all that time daydreaming, you would remember the dog's name was Spot. :)
Awww. I'm sort of reminded of Calvin & Hobbes's endless dreams of Spaceman Spiff, and of Mrs Wormwood having to bring him back to earth. Made me smile. To follow on from Stephen Hayes's comment - I still dream of flying now and then at nearly 50 - but then I never really grew up so I suppose that explains it.
ReplyDeleteGlad the Mrs. Maxwells of this world never held you back.
ReplyDeleteCool poem, Bug.
ReplyDeleteEvokes childhood so very well!
Oh yes, Argent...I'm older than you, and I still have dreams in which I fly...awesome dreams! But I never grew up, either :-)
ReplyDeleteYou write with such imagination and I love that you start out without knowing and then bam that muse just seemed to hit you. Lovely job really.
ReplyDeleteGreat feeling and movement to this poem.
ReplyDeleteI loved your explanitory note at the end, too. :)
Bones of a great short story there. Dana -v- Mrs.Maxwell!
ReplyDelete...your Mother suggested she rap your hand? Poor Mrs. Maxwell... sounds like she didn't rap it that hard. Day dreaming during class.. many a genius has done that! :)
ReplyDeleteA lovely vignette. Let's hope Mrs. Maxwell also went onto better things. If you're curious. my Magpie 85 is Topsy.
ReplyDeleteI think I was in your first grade class - or one very similar!
ReplyDeleteVery powerful! All the way to the very last line. I loved it! "This rapped hand has written many a dream as well.
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