One of my very favorite poetry bus poems that I’ve written was the one where we had to all start with the same first line. So I’m copying that idea. There are no rules about the number of lines and rhyming or not rhyming. Simply write a poem that starts with this phrase:
I am a crooked line
I’m cheating, because I’ve stolen that line from a poem I wrote back in January. You may go looking for it if you want, but I’ll post it later (don’t want to influence you guys). So, write a poem, post it, come back here & give me your link in the comments. I’ll post all the links at the bottom of the page. Let's roll!
Wow - look who's first! Totalfeckineejit!
Jeanne Iris
Brian Miller
Helen
Lolamouse
Elaine
Betsy & Me!
M.A.S.
Niamh
Karen
Lucy
120 Socks
Jinksy
Dr. FTSE
Peter Goulding
Izzy
Enchanted Oak
Poetikat
Titus
Margaret
Jeanne Iris
Brian Miller
Helen
Lolamouse
Elaine
Betsy & Me!
M.A.S.
Niamh
Karen
Lucy
120 Socks
Jinksy
Dr. FTSE
Peter Goulding
Izzy
Enchanted Oak
Poetikat
Titus
Margaret
That was one of my favourite Buses too! It was the "Stella McCartney/Stella Artois" one, wasn't it?
ReplyDeleteI sense a bit of Dr. Seuss coming over me. King of a Dr. Seuss/Mrs Hide! (silly)
Yes, I can handle tat first line! Nice going your Bugness and thank you!
ReplyDeleteI'm on!!
ReplyDeleteKat - I think you're right. It sure was a lot of fun.
ReplyDeleteWell, TFE - I'm amazed that you're first :)
nice...you know i have never riden before but i like that opening line...will see what i can work up for tomorrow...
ReplyDeleteGreat prompt, Ms. Dana!
ReplyDeleteMy poem's up right here:
http://www.revolutionaryrevelry.blogspot.com
ok, bug...first time rider...here you go...
ReplyDeleteFirst Bus Ride
My ticket to ride is here:
ReplyDeletehttp://woonietest.blogspot.com/2011/04/poetry-bus-on-crooked-line.html
Great idea! These are so fun!
ReplyDeleteHi. Came from WaystationOne!
ReplyDeleteI live in Ohio! Cedarville....an hour southwest from Columbus. :)
This was a challenge but fun! Here it is:http://lolamousedroppings.blogspot.com/2011/04/crooked-line.html
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ReplyDeleteThis is my first ride. What fun. Will jump on board again...and even go a few extra stops next time!
ReplyDeletehttp://hiddenheartbeat.blogspot.com/2011/04/say-cheese.html
I decided to get on the bus.
ReplyDeleteThe Sneaky Contradiction
Here I am in all my gory. Yeah, that's right:
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ReplyDeleteSorry, Danabug. Deleted comment (above) had incorrect link to my ticket HERE.
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ReplyDeleteHi Bug jumping on late and a little in a hurry, thanks for the great prompt.
ReplyDeleteSorry the first link went bananas! I'll try again. HERE
ReplyDeleteI'll sit quietly at the back. Poem HERE.
ReplyDeleteAfraid I've gone off the straight and narrow - http://stammeringpoet.blogspot.com/2011/04/dana-bug-crooked-line-poetry-bus.html
ReplyDeleteToo many choices! got lost in possibilities- Thanks.But it is Monday...
ReplyDeletehttp://izzy-conversing.blogspot.com/2011/04/poetry-bus-41111.html
Please, come pick me up!
ReplyDeleteWe’ve all gone crooked
I'm late Bug, and in truth hardly here at all, but I am here:
ReplyDeletehttp://titusthedog.blogspot.com/2011/04/bug-bus.html
Can anyone try this? And how long is it "open". Till the next "bus" takes off?
ReplyDeleteThank you for hosting! What a fun bus this is - I hope there are chaperones! :)
ReplyDeleteMy poem
thank you =)
ReplyDeletehttp://crankymango.blogspot.com/2011/04/line.html