Tuesday Night Clog Practice
Cacophony
I look out the
Grimy window
Grimy window
Search for peace
Too loud
The quiet is imagined
Through dirt and rain
The green so calm
Drops on roof imagined
The babble raises
To fever pitch
Momentary calm
As one voice calls out
And chaos again
As one voice calls out
And chaos again
To the window
Calm, dark wood
Evidence of rain not heard
Then a million castanets
In perfect time
In perfect time
Order from melee
The dance is on
Window forgotten
*The Bailey Mountain Cloggers still exist at Mars Hill College, my alma mater. They've had 18 National Championships, so I reckon they’re pretty good. Click here to see a list of their videos. If you want to experience what I was experiencing that night in 1983 choose the Acapella clip.
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Bug, this is great! I can see you sitting in that balcony writing away. I am jumping over to the site .. I want to witness this energy and talent.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful response to the prompt Bug! You took us on a journey back in time! Lovely writing!! :-)
ReplyDeleteha. my sister clogged...the noise nearly drove my brother and i mad...smiles.
ReplyDeleteThis northern girl has never heard of clogging. I love when you pull these great pieces from your archives.
ReplyDeleteThere cannot be very many poems about clogging! Nicely done and nice tidy ending.
ReplyDeleteLovely Bug, and so wonderful to have something from the past!
ReplyDeleteas a committed two-left footer i can't imagine wanting to dance in publc, but i guess clog dancing has its plusses
ReplyDeleteNice post
Sight and sound at odds-
ReplyDeleteThey say, we can learn to tune one out
for the sake of the other- depends on my mood! I think the 'riverdance' style's a bit quieter- Thanks for sharing this!
You're a wonderful poet, and apparently, you've been one your entire life. Thanks for the glimpse inside your past.
ReplyDeleteClogging is a true American branch on an old tree of Irish and Scottish dance. You cannot write the word without hearing the precision and sounds of the dance through the ages! Lovely poem of finding quiet amidst the rumble.
ReplyDeleteI was picturing you there as I read this - looking out the window, writing, watching the dancers. I'm a horrible dancer. My husband isn't any better. We are such losers at weddings. :)
ReplyDeleteI was picturing you there as I read this - looking out the window, writing, watching the dancers. I'm a horrible dancer. My husband isn't any better. We are such losers at weddings. :)
ReplyDeleteNow you know that wasn't my fault. Right?
ReplyDeleteRIGHT???
ReplyDeleteYou know what, Bug? I'm off to take up clog dancing!
ReplyDeleteLovely piece.
what I want to know is - were you a millipede or a centipede?
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone! Bella, you are a nut :)
ReplyDeleteIsabel - I think a millipede because it would have the most left feet. Heh.
I'm with you, Bug... it's fun to watch, but darned if I've got the rhythm (or stamina) for it!
ReplyDeleteI like the thought of dancing to the rhytm of the rain - clogs or no! :)
ReplyDeleteMy former roomate's brother clogged his way through college doing shows with a friend.
ReplyDeleteMaybe it was Pony?? :)
xo
What a delightful tale - love it!
ReplyDeleteamazing words.
ReplyDeletekeep it up